by Shoggoth on the Roof » Mon Mar 09, 2015 3:38 pm
Awkward phrasing with one of Angie's dialog options.
Choosing to tell her about your adventures, when requesting that you try coming to her as a rubber tigress and she says "Listen I know you love me as the way I am."
Given the context, "Listen, you know I love you as the way you are," would make more sense.
Another issue-
Brian's description under Look mentions that he has a thick, bony horn. Rhino horns aren't made of bone, they're made of keratin, so changing it to just read something like "a thick horn," or "a thick, heavy horn" would be better.
A big monster like that on such a pointed roof... You may ask 'how does it stay up there, if it's so difficult?'
That, I can tell you in one word: tentacles!