by TigerStripes » Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:39 pm
I find having the short descriptions for the sections a little odd, but it's not a major concern. It's just different.
The various sub-sections you've chosen cover things fairly well, though I expect they won't really suit all NPCs or their order will need to be shuffled around for them.
I can see the description section getting a little complicated for a couple of NPCs who go through several changes or even have variations within those states. Examples would include Sam (having 4 different forms) and Alexandra (3 while 'monster', bad girl w/numerous sub-variations and pregnant state and good girl form).
For most other NPCs, the 'Effects on Inventory' (misspelled) would either contain nothing or just cover info mentioned in other parts. It's less redundant with Steven, consolidating a few disparate items.
But like I said last time, it's not what I would have done, but that doesn't mean it's wrong. It's certainly more thorough, which is a good thing. I doubt I'd've gone into that much detail.