Interesting Setting. Can't say no to some Egyptian Shenanigans.
I'll hit you with a few minor things before getting to the bigger matter. First off, you want to set non-infectious entry to true. Descriptor and Type entry are irrelevant since those are descriptions the player inherits upon body infection. Your attack entry has a period behind each sting. Instead, remove it from all of them and then just put a single period behind the [at random] -- Efficiency!
Whenever adding content to the game, always consider your smut-to-content ratio. Since this is a porn game, players will generally be expecting everything they encounter to entail pornographic content. For this reason, the second a player sees your guards pop into the game, they will immediately -- and without a second thought -- choose to submit to them.
So, when players get bitch slapped straight across the room, you can understand their inevitable frustration. Oh, they understand it's a barrier, but they also understand that every wall is a new adventure if you bring along a dildo with a suction base. For this reason, it's important for me to point out that you're producing content which doesn't necessarily translate into something the player will regard as "Worthwhile", strictly speaking.
I'm not necessarily telling you to add sexual content to the encounter, though. For example, Doran has probably the best smut-to-content ratio of any major NPC, and he won't have sex if you submit or lose to him in combat, but in his case it's to ignite a mystery, "How curious, a monster that wants to fight me but not have sex with me? I wonder what happens when I beat it!"
Of course, the main reason for
both of these instances is to ensure that the player is experiencing the world and not making a b-line straight to whatever new content pops up. However, it
is something I do suggest you be mindful of, especially in the future.
The issue of people blundering still stands, however. Apply something along these lines to the end of the description:
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[italic type]Oddly enough, from the way it behaves, the construct is clearly not interested in engaging in any sexual activity[roman type]...
That should rectify the issue.