Haha, just noticed... if this and Selena thr catgirl work out, the farm will have a "grow your own npc" theme too
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Haha, just noticed... if this and Selena thr catgirl work out, the farm will have a "grow your own npc" theme too
That looks pretty hot from what I saw when skipping over it.
First impression notes:
- find multiple synonyms for `the egg`
- Check if the player is pregnant before unbirthing a giant egg
Well, you can describe it - instead of "touching the egg" you can say "touching the lifegiving oval" or such things. "precious shape", "you cradle the embryo in its protective shell", ...
I noticed that the cum absorption part of the male egg sex scene ends in two very similar sentences with almost the same words. Could you have another look please and try to avoid word repetitions? Synonyms are the way to go...
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