Re: Typos and Bugs
Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 5:30 pm
TigerStripes wrote:When you defeat the German Shepard while taking Amy back to the Bunker
Not sure where this scene is located. I could not find it in either Amy or the German Shepherd file by searching for the keywords from the text you mentioned. Wahn may have to correct this one.
Here is the Git link where I found it. https://github.com/Nuku/Flexible-Surviv ... Events.i7x
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male player give Ryousei a blowjob last paragraph
“Thank you. That was quite pleasurable,” Ryousei says with a purr in his voice, then pulls you up to your feet and hugs you tight. His lust satisfied for now, Ryousei nevertheless keeps his arms around you and strokes your skin gently. Not one for cheap one-night-stands, he clearly wants to spend time with you, even outside of immediate sex. Then, after giving the side of your neck a long lick and breathing in your scent deeply, he says, “Being your companion makes the time on this wretched world bearable, even... pleasant, at times. I want you to think about what you’ll do when I eventually find my way back home. Would you accompany me, leave this place? My army needs people like you - strong and dependable. There will be hardship, but also rewards...” He squeezes your shoulder with one hand, mrowling as his manhood throbs inside you again, then finally pulls out and reaches for his kimono. “Don’t answer now, it’s moot until I can open a portal anyways. Just... think about it,” he says, then moves away a bit to groom his fur into its usual impeccable state and get dressed.
Last half of the paragraph is the same as the get fucked scene
male player get fucked by Ryousei first paragraph
A rumbling purr from his broad chest vibrates through and through your body, putting you into a very relaxed, open state.
remove the through and
Third paragraph
Suddenly, Ryousei nips the bend between your neck and shoulder a little with his sharp canines - and the unexpected sensation distracts you in just the moment he thrusts his hips against you, sinking the spined shaft between his legs deep.
not sure if that's a mistake at the end or intentional
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Male Player First time Encounter with a Feral Wolf
You run into a Feral Wolf.
A large canine on all fours. A feral looking wolf on four feet, almost three quarts your height, with great muscles under dense black fur. He has dark blue eyes and white, sharp, canine, teeth. His legs a thick and powerful looking, his whole form obviously built for hunting fast prey. His fur is matted with grime, muck, and some other substance, giving him a very rugged look. When he sees you, his lips
peel in a snarl, expose those deadly teeth. “Grrrrrrrr!” he growls, charging at you with feral rage in his eyes.
"A large canine on all fours. A feral looking wolf on four feet," not sure if that's intentional or accident but it sounds a bit redundent.
Quarts should be quarters.
"His legs a thick and powerful looking"
a should be and
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Male Player Wrestling Wolf loss scene first sentence
Pinned down by the lupine wrestler, he gives you a growling skronk.
Didn't know what skronk meant until I googled it but maybe change it to "growling leer." so people will know what you mean
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As you lose your last shreds of humanity, you feel the need to join your team supplant all other concerns. Roaming the campus until you run into one of the other gorillas, you let him guide you to their club headquarters and join in for almost constant training and practice games - with some sexy fun between the players themselves and any fans coming along being thrown in. When the military finally moves in, soldiers try to evacuate the campus and attempt to interrupt a game - which doesn’t go over well. It’s only a matter of moments before your organized team has overwhelmed the squad of men and takes an “ah, it’s almost half-time and we got these guys on our hands” break - which involves you sinking your manhood into a tight soldier’s ass in a wild gangbang.
There aren’t any attempts to move you from the campus for a while after that, until a smooth-talking businessman comes along one day and tells you about the creation of the “Shifted AmGorillaTeamn Football League” - totally wrapping all the gorillas around his finger with stories of athletic battle and glory. Soon, the whole team agrees to lets him manage them and follows him readily to the military’s medical holding facility for a “pre-game” checkup. After being prodded and poked, then given injections to make you noninfectious, your manager leads you off to become one of the top teams in the league - with him cashiering in almost all the profits. Though at least he has to work hard to keep this exploitation going - keeping under control a whole team of wild and boisterous gorillas who’ll want to fuck anyone they encounter...
Not sure if this is spelled as intended Shifted AmGorillaTeamn Football League
shouldn't cashiering be cashing
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This is just a thought but as a female it's understood that you can get pregnant. Also as a Herm any variation, or a c-boy it should also be understood that you would probably be able to get pregnant, but if your a male with the m-preg feat wouldn't you not know right away that you can get pregnant? The thought is would be for a one off scene for an M-preg male that has not ever gotten pregnant that the first time you meet Dr. Medea as a M-preg male if you haven't had any kids you wouldn't realize you can get pregnant until she examines you, upon you maybe telling her that frequently you have thoughts of getting fucked and cum filled by as many males as possible with an unusual warmth in your ass at periodic intervals. At which point she offers to examine you to see what's up.
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It's not an issue but I thought I would mention it anyway the Git name file for the Vixen nurse is naughty nurse so people might have trouble finding it.