TigerStripes wrote:UsernamePending wrote:There is at least one typo in the Blot situation that I have encountered. Nothing major, overlooked it the first few times I came across Blot.
What specifically is the typo? Next time you spot it, can you copy/paste the error?
Your ability to breath is quickly returned to you, but it's clearly from within the toy itself, your taste and smell a swill of sterile synthetics and your sexual fluids.
Breathe.
It's becoming extremely difficult to keep a clear head and in control of the situation. If there was any wiser time to get off this crazy thing, it'd be right about now...
...and stay in control of the situation.
Body adjusted until it fits as much as a suit as it is a new prison.
This just feels like it was written for a comma, I personally think it'd be better reworded.
With one final pull, you're drawn entirely into the body of the inflatably pony.
Inflatable.
Warmth of your hot release awash against you, you feel it gradually your maw through the rubbery tube, pumping its occupant with the slight excess.
...gradually fill your maw.
These are the ones I found when doing a thorough typo scan. Considering how much text was there, there are very few typos that I noticed. Hope this helps!